Corrections

Text from Nousher - English

  • letter

  • Dear ABC, Thank you for your nice mail.
  • Especial thanks for your attachment.
  • With every mail, you send file.
  • This is very interesting, helpful for learning education.
  • Unfortunately the file sent about generations can not be viewed on my smart phone.
  • Adobe reader (an apps used in android phone) considers this file as a corrupted file.
  • I am such a person who do not have any personal computer.
  • With smart phone I am trying to solve almost all kind of works.
  • But it is true that phone has some limitations, which can not be faced when a person works in computer.
  • Perhaps, the correct form of " “But now-a-days many hotel and restaurant are being delivered as well as western foods" is "now-a-days many hotels and restaurants are being established, where local foods as well as westerns are supplied". Am I right?
  • Do you think that the placement of 'perhaps' at the first of this block is right?
  • In Dhaka and some cities and towns of Bangladesh especial type of restaurant is available where you can eat as you wish by paying fixed amount of money.
  • I think I need explain what I am saying.
  • If I take food of 10 Tk (taka is the name Bangladeshi currency), I will have to pay 100 Tk.
  • If I take food of 500 Tk, I will also have to pay 100 Tk.
  • Now I would like to say about my educational background.
  • I passed S.S.C in 2007.
  • S.S.C means Secondary School Certificate.
  • After passing S.S.C, I admitted into Textile Institute, Tangail to get Diploma in textile engineering.
  • The duration of this course is four years.
  • In 2011 I completed this course.
  • In the middle of 2012, I admitted into Dhaka University of Engineering and Technology (DUET) to get B.S.C degree in textile engineering.
  • Duration of this course is also four years.
  • Now I am a student of 4th year.
  • To complete this course less than eight month is needed.
  • I have got two sisters.
  • Both of them are students.
  • I am the elder child of my parents.
  • I have a lot of cousin.
  • The number of cousins exceed 25.
  • I think, after knowing this, you are being surprised.
  • The growth of population of the South Asia is very high.
  • My mother is a housewife, and my father works in a garments factory as a quality inspector.
  • Best regards, XYZ.

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