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Text from Natasha_Gera - English

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  • Many peoples say that social networking technology making young people more antisocial.
  • I disaree with it.
  • In my opinion internet contranwise help young peoples communicate and stay in touch.
  • And social network is a place where each can contact with people from all over the world.
  • There peoples can communicate with other without leaving home.
  • But there are also disadvantages.
  • Internet takes a lot of time and we should stand still.
  • Sometimes popularity in social network is falsehood.
  • In live you may be less friend.
  • Either, internet may be cause of many diseases.
  • So I decided that we may using social network little by little.
  • And monitor that it doesn't become dependent _ Thanks^^

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