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Peace and love
What happened last friday in Paris is very sad.
Some crazy people hate the french way of life.
They are also angry about the fact we love music and meet each others to take good times.
They want to reduce our liberty and scare us with violence.
We must keep living and protect our strong values.
We share the pain with all the families who lost someone in those terrible terrorist attacks.
Peace and love.

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- Peace and love
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- What happened last friday in Paris is very sad.
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- Some crazy people hate the french way of life.
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- They are also angry about the fact we love music and meet each others to take good times.
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- They want to reduce our liberty and scare us with violence.
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- We must keep living and protect our strong values.
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- We share the pain with all the families who lost someone in those terrible terrorist attacks.
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- Peace and love.
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