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I live in France
I was born in Melun, Seine-et-Marne.
It's not really far away from Paris, I had just to take the subway to go to the capital.
During eleven years I lived in Savigny-le-Temple, another French city, but this place is a synonym of wounds and suffer for me...
After, we (my mom and me) were go to two or three others cities in the same region.
When my mom met my stepfather, she ask me if I wanted to follow her to Toulon (in the south of my country, in 800 km from Paris) or to stay with my father...
As I hate my father since my childhood, i decided to follow her without any hesitation !
Now, I am 20 and I live near to Toulon since four years now.

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- I live in France
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- I was born in Melun, Seine-et-Marne.
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- It's not really far away from Paris, I had just to take the subway to go to the capital.
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- During eleven years I lived in Savigny-le-Temple, another French city, but this place is a synonym of wounds and suffer for me...
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- After, we (my mom and me) were go to two or three others cities in the same region.
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문장 5
- When my mom met my stepfather, she ask me if I wanted to follow her to Toulon (in the south of my country, in 800 km from Paris) or to stay with my father...
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문장 6
- As I hate my father since my childhood, i decided to follow her without any hesitation !
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- Now, I am 20 and I live near to Toulon since four years now.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7