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experience about first speech
The first day when I went on stage to deliver speech, I feel so nervous.
My hands and legs were dithering with fear.
My throat had been becoming dry.
When I started to deliver speech, the words were entangling with each other.
I was watching fuzzy everything with my eyes.
It seemed to me that this anxious time would never be end.
It would continue forever.
After finishing my speech, when I went to my sit, I had been sitting in my sit towards my head down until the end of ceremony.
It took me many days to be normal.

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- experience about first speech
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- The first day when I went on stage to deliver speech, I feel so nervous.
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- My hands and legs were dithering with fear.
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- My throat had been becoming dry.
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- When I started to deliver speech, the words were entangling with each other.
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- I was watching fuzzy everything with my eyes.
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- It seemed to me that this anxious time would never be end.
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- It would continue forever.
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- After finishing my speech, when I went to my sit, I had been sitting in my sit towards my head down until the end of ceremony.
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- It took me many days to be normal.
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