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Text from Lulianna - English

  • Describe a Drawing

  • This picture is a drawing of Uncle Sam which is a common national personnification of the United sates.
  • This is why he is wearing the american colors (blue, white and red) along with the stars and the red and white strips which remains of the american flag.
  • All around him, we can see 12 people who are taking care of him : A woman is sewing his jacket while another one is sweeping it, 3 people are brushing and washing his hair and his beard, 2 people are polishing his shoes, 2 other are painting his clothing and an other one is ironing his throusers.
  • All those 12 people represent immigrants who came to the USA in order to live the american dream, which includes having a good job and a pleasant life but this drawing shows that they held unskilled jobs and are considered as menial no matter how hard they work

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  • Sentence 2
    • This is why he is wearing the american colors (blue, white and red) along with the stars and the red and white strips which remains of the american flag.
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  • Sentence 3
    • All around him, we can see 12 people who are taking care of him : A woman is sewing his jacket while another one is sweeping it, 3 people are brushing and washing his hair and his beard, 2 people are polishing his shoes, 2 other are painting his clothing and an other one is ironing his throusers.
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  • Sentence 4
    • All those 12 people represent immigrants who came to the USA in order to live the american dream, which includes having a good job and a pleasant life but this drawing shows that they held unskilled jobs and are considered as menial no matter how hard they work
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