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  • Who am i?

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  • I want to tell about my self.What i can say first?I'm student and me seventeen years old.I have big family: my twin-brother Ivan, my old brother Vladimir , and of course father and mother.Also my family have two pets: cat and parrot.Learn english i began in school from five class.Second what i want to say about my hobbies.I like ride on roller-skating and play computer games.This is not all i can say about my self. Good buy.

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    • I want to tell about my self.What i can say first?I'm student and me seventeen years old.I have big family: my twin-brother Ivan, my old brother Vladimir , and of course father and mother.Also my family have two pets: cat and parrot.Learn english i began in school from five class.Second what i want to say about my hobbies.I like ride on roller-skating and play computer games.This is not all i can say about my self. Good buy.
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