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Patch Adams(first part)
Patch Adams is famous for the"clowntherapy".But himself don't approve this term because it dimished all.He is a tall man.He is a giant.
He has long white and blue hairs.
He is as uncomfortable as cumbersome for his ideas about ill.
He said:"The true purpose of this profession it is not cure the diseases but to care to the patiences".
He works to this concept from forty years.
He build an istitute "Gesundheit".It is an institute where there are free care and many smiles like therapy.

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- Patch Adams is famous for the"clowntherapy".But himself don't approve this term because it dimished all.He is a tall man.He is a giant.
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- He has long white and blue hairs.
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- He is as uncomfortable as cumbersome for his ideas about ill.
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- He said:"The true purpose of this profession it is not cure the diseases but to care to the patiences".
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- He works to this concept from forty years.
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- He build an istitute "Gesundheit".It is an institute where there are free care and many smiles like therapy.
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