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  • My First Day join at Polyglotclub

  • Hello Guys, I'm newbie in here.
  • It's my first day.
  • Now, I will tell you about my educational background.
  • I am student at Semarang State University, my major is Accounting.
  • I hope i can reach my graduateion on July 2016.
  • After I graduated from my university, I will search a job as Accountant.
  • But, i have some problem.
  • Now, in my country searching a job is not easy.
  • I must have another skill (e.x. speaking english fluenctly).
  • So, I try to join in this grup to increase my skill about English.
  • Thanks for accepting me, I'm happy join in this grup.

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