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(Three people speak ) _Look!

It's rainning cats and dogs!

_you remember ? _oh God! _no!

_it was the day of owr first meeting _yes we have been good friends since this day _actually how did you get there ? _where ?

_in that abandoned house _that's a long story _come on ! Tell us !

_okey,it was in fall _yes we know ,we were there _yeah like you were a poet ? _ok ok fine!

So I came back by mom.

I decided to take a way through the forest.

Suddenly my old car stopped.

I tried to call someone but there wasn't any network.

So I got out to get some help when it was pouring .I saw a trouble small light .I started to run and I arrived in front of a house that looked like abandonned but anyway I knocked at the door .No one opened.

I turned back to leave this place .It was scaring me .At this moment I heard the door screeching and a sweet voice tell me "come inside young girl ".

I turned agai :nobady was there .I went inside.

And you Lily .How did you get there ?

_well my story is crazier than Mandy .I was into the forest _why ? _wait wait !

I'm gone to tell you the story.

I had to camp with my friends in that forest.

I went to pick some muchroomes but I got lost .Suddenly I met a really big and terrifing beer .I took no time to think : I ran .All of a sudden I fell in a lake and I saw a big crocodile .

_stop lying _ok ok ...and I saw a little frog .I swam so fast to make my way of the water.

I was completely lost !

I continued to walk.

I shouted :"hey ho !someone here ?" But only the silence answered me .The sky was cloudy. few minutes later there was a shower.

I saw a little light too .I ran and I arrived in front of a very old house .I knocked and the door opened alone .And you Sandy ?

_me I was inside.

_yeees...but how did you arrive there ?

_a few weeks ago ,I have received a letter .The letter came by a notary .I was the only heir of my aunt .I have receive tweenty thousand Euro and a house. That house.

I lived in the USA.

I've taken a plaine and then a taxi to come here.

When finally I arrived in the house.

In first I didn't want to go inside but a mysterious something attired me.

I opened the door and I saw the tatty cell ,the cracking ground.

On the ground floor was a big kitchen and a spacious living room with a old and flowers-like motifs curtains and armchairs .I didn't stop sneeze.

I would continue the visit ,I took the stairs for up to the attic when I heard footsteps:it was you Mandy.

_yes I'm remember.

I was great to see the look on your face.

_Yes I'm scared!

I wound down to welcome you.

_when I arrived you were drinking coffee like today _yes Sandy it has the same delicious than that's moment.

_but ...it's not me who's done it.

It's you Mandy. _me?

No it's you _no it's you _ok ok girls it's only one more weird thing happened in there. ....

_and what are the other weird things ?

_the door opened alone,the sweet voice up above Mandy calling ,a old dress you worn it and your strange behavior ,the stran..

_sorry sorry but which dress ?I've never do that ! _yes you did !

Before you became of the attic with your family's photo album.

_it's not true !

_ you must have overlooked _that's at the moment we could see how much you looked like your aunt _girls think you my aunt...

_nooo ...I don't want to hear that .It's not possible .

_ok ok but if that the ghost of my aunt ,she was very kind .

_I told you stop!

I don't want to hear you say that again.

_nevertheless she done a delicious coffee . _Lola !

_haha by the way !the works is progressing ?

_yes very good indeed.

_Sandy I don't understand you.

Why want you keep that horrible house?

_because there is ,of this house,a welcoming atmosphere and I love that.

_don't tell mee you want live there _yes!why not !

_I will never go back to that house ...

_you are a slight exaggeration ,no ?

_let me finish ...I will never go back to that house unless you do the same coffee.

_maybe you could ask her aunt for the recipe ... _Mandy !