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I want to improve my english
Hi !
I'm a law student and I want to improve my english because it's really important to speak this langage.
I understand it but I don't practise it seriously so I have gaps in in my expression.
Anybody can help me please ?

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- I want to improve my english
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句子 1
- Hi !
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I'm a law student and I want to improve my english because it's really important to speak this langage.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I understand it but I don't practise it seriously so I have gaps in in my expression.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Anybody can help me please ?
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4