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  • Dear Madam, Miss W, I would like to apply for the position of Marketing Communication Driver, recently advertised on D career site.
  • After three years of experiences in international sales and marketing in the HVAC Industry, I am looking for new opportunities in the field of Digital Marketing and Communication.
  • As you can see from my enclosed C.V., I have occupied a position of international account manager for more than 3 years at M, gaining valuable experience in the HVAC industry.
  • My key mission was to develop and maintain the relations with several international clients (From 300.000 to 1.2 million Euros).
  • The achievements I am the most proud of is the development of our partnership with RB.
  • RB is the world leader in the distribution of electrical products and solutions for the industrial, residential and commercial market.
  • I was in charge of the coordination of Marketing and communication operations and that accompany the launching of C Brand in Belgium.
  • This includes mailing campaigns, organization of training and supervision of marketing operation realized by our clients.
  • This operations lead to an increase of the turnover of 70% on the area.
  • I was also in charge of the translation or the creations of marketing tools for our internationals clients.
  • Two projects that I have in mind are very important to me: the upgrading of packaging and the amelioration of the instructions of a product destined to the Balkan market in partnership with the technical department.
  • Those two projects were very interesting and helped us to really increase our sells in the area by adapting our products to the needs of the Balkans customers.
  • Thanks to my first work experience as a P.R. assistant at EParis, I have a very good knowledge of the Media in France (Press Online, offline and TV).
  • As our main clients were also coming for the energy area, I have learned a lot on the main energy issues, knowledge that are essential for a communication manager.
  • As well as those qualities, my studies at SP also developed my skills at writing reports, analyzing economics subjects and at making PPT presentation.
  • One of the main reasons for choosing Marketing and Communication area as a career is that for a long time, I have been interested on how a communication campaign can are important and can positively impact the sales of a company.
  • Especially in P.R. or with the new media.
  • The requirement of writing skills and creativity is also the reason why I want this position.
  • Indeed, after a few years in the sales, I would like to carry on my career in the industry and HVAC area but with day to day tasks that are more related to marketing and communications, subjects that I studied at SP for two years.
  • My reason for applying to D are as follows: First, I would like to carry on working in the industry because I am passionate by topics about Energy, energy efficiency, innovation and HVAC issues.
  • At Danfoss, I think I will be able to communicate on those topics and to learn from the best specialist on the subject.
  • Second, I would like to keep working in an international environment.
  • My experiences at the export department allowed me to work with clients from all around the world.
  • It was a great experience, very challenging and rewarding.
  • I seek to work in an international environment, which allows me to use the several languages I speak.
  • Think that, at D, I will be given the opportunities to work in an international team, and maybe, in a few year, to continue my career abroad.
  • Hard working, flexible, result oriented and fast learning person, I am thus deeply motivated to join D Team in Trevoux to maximize my skills and produce excellent Marketing and Communication results.
  • I am very excited about this opportunity and look forward to discuss my application with you in greater details.
  • Should you require any further information, please get in touch.
  • Yours sincerely,

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  • câu 1
    • Dear Madam, Miss W, I would like to apply for the position of Marketing Communication Driver, recently advertised on D career site.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • After three years of experiences in international sales and marketing in the HVAC Industry, I am looking for new opportunities in the field of Digital Marketing and Communication.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • As you can see from my enclosed C.V., I have occupied a position of international account manager for more than 3 years at M, gaining valuable experience in the HVAC industry.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • My key mission was to develop and maintain the relations with several international clients (From 300.000 to 1.2 million Euros).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
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  • câu 6
    • RB is the world leader in the distribution of electrical products and solutions for the industrial, residential and commercial market.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • I was in charge of the coordination of Marketing and communication operations and that accompany the launching of C Brand in Belgium.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • This includes mailing campaigns, organization of training and supervision of marketing operation realized by our clients.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
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    • I was also in charge of the translation or the creations of marketing tools for our internationals clients.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
  • câu 11
    • Two projects that I have in mind are very important to me: the upgrading of packaging and the amelioration of the instructions of a product destined to the Balkan market in partnership with the technical department.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
  • câu 12
    • Those two projects were very interesting and helped us to really increase our sells in the area by adapting our products to the needs of the Balkans customers.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
  • câu 13
    • Thanks to my first work experience as a P.R. assistant at EParis, I have a very good knowledge of the Media in France (Press Online, offline and TV).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13
  • câu 14
    • As our main clients were also coming for the energy area, I have learned a lot on the main energy issues, knowledge that are essential for a communication manager.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14
  • câu 15
    • As well as those qualities, my studies at SP also developed my skills at writing reports, analyzing economics subjects and at making PPT presentation.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15
  • câu 16
    • One of the main reasons for choosing Marketing and Communication area as a career is that for a long time, I have been interested on how a communication campaign can are important and can positively impact the sales of a company.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16
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  • câu 19
    • Indeed, after a few years in the sales, I would like to carry on my career in the industry and HVAC area but with day to day tasks that are more related to marketing and communications, subjects that I studied at SP for two years.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 19ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 19
  • câu 20
    • My reason for applying to D are as follows: First, I would like to carry on working in the industry because I am passionate by topics about Energy, energy efficiency, innovation and HVAC issues.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 20ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 20
  • câu 21
    • At Danfoss, I think I will be able to communicate on those topics and to learn from the best specialist on the subject.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 21ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 21
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    • Think that, at D, I will be given the opportunities to work in an international team, and maybe, in a few year, to continue my career abroad.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 26ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 26
  • câu 27
    • Hard working, flexible, result oriented and fast learning person, I am thus deeply motivated to join D Team in Trevoux to maximize my skills and produce excellent Marketing and Communication results.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 27ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 27
  • câu 28
    • I am very excited about this opportunity and look forward to discuss my application with you in greater details.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 28ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 28
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