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  • Application

  • Dear Ms. Cunningham, I am writing to you because of the job advertisement.
  • I am a just veterinary graduate.
  • I am an enthusiast of life in the countryside and everything related to camp activities.
  • Since I was ten years old, I have attended summer camps almost every year.
  • Because of that, I know very well the dynamics and values necessary to be a good camp monitor.
  • I would like to emphasize I went to an international and bilingual camp three consecutive summers, where there were children from different countries (as Lebanon, France, United Kingdom and even Saudi Arabia).
  • It was an enriching experience, which taught me a lot (including English notions), and I think it could be a valuable aspect to keep in mind at the time of selecting a camp monitor.
  • I also have a wide experience with children since I have three younger siblings and six younger cousins, and I have always been responsible for taking care of and amuse them when the adults were not at home.
  • My CV, also my English and camp monitor certificates, are attached to the e-mail.
  • In case you need any further information, I will be glad to provide it. Cordially, I.

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    • I would like to emphasize I went to an international and bilingual camp three consecutive summers, where there were children from different countries (as Lebanon, France, United Kingdom and even Saudi Arabia).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • It was an enriching experience, which taught me a lot (including English notions), and I think it could be a valuable aspect to keep in mind at the time of selecting a camp monitor.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • I also have a wide experience with children since I have three younger siblings and six younger cousins, and I have always been responsible for taking care of and amuse them when the adults were not at home.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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