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Winter has come:)
Can you correct this sentence: "Winter is coming.
And finally winter has come." Is it correct?
Has or had, or had been or what?:)

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标题
- Winter has come:)
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Can you correct this sentence: "Winter is coming.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- And finally winter has come." Is it correct?
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- Has or had, or had been or what?:)
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3