批改

從Kasahara來的文本 - English

About new technologies
In my opinion, new technologies are great!
I think that new inventions and developments of the technology could make life easier, and more amazing too.
I cannot imagine living without mobile phones, internet, etc..
In the health field, the news technologies are very important, as they can improve the investigations and make them end in a better way.

标题
- About new technologies
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- In my opinion, new technologies are great!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I think that new inventions and developments of the technology could make life easier, and more amazing too.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I cannot imagine living without mobile phones, internet, etc..
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- In the health field, the news technologies are very important, as they can improve the investigations and make them end in a better way.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4