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Texto de yellow111 - English

  • my dream

  • I am kazakh.
  • And i am 16 years old.
  • I always wanted go to the America.
  • I want to study there and want to improve my English.
  • Now i lives in Kazakhstan with my parents and my sisters.
  • When I will 18,i'll go to the Vegas or New York,but of cource it's just child's dream))) But i think this my ''child's dream'' can executed, if I will continue study English and really want to go to the America and other cities there)

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