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  • the short story,, the empty house´´ was writen by a men namend arthur conan doyle in the year 1903, she acts from holmes and watson.the supposedly dead holmes pop up in the office from watson and togehter they slove s case.
  • the story begins as watson tell something about a slaying, as he go to the crime scene, he had a confrontation with an old men. later the old men go to the office of watson and the old men is sherlock. together they collect tokens about bring the men who kill a men and try to kill sherlock to the police.

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    • the short story,, the empty house´´ was writen by a men namend arthur conan doyle in the year 1903, she acts from holmes and watson.the supposedly dead holmes pop up in the office from watson and togehter they slove s case.
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    • the story begins as watson tell something about a slaying, as he go to the crime scene, he had a confrontation with an old men. later the old men go to the office of watson and the old men is sherlock. together they collect tokens about bring the men who kill a men and try to kill sherlock to the police.
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