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Hello everybody, I'm Capucine, I'm twenty years old and I'm a Frenchy girl !
I want to improve my English because I have very bad level and I have to speak well for a job interview !
That's why i decided to sign up on the site !
Thank you for your correction and i hope you a very good evening ! :) Bye !
See you soon in my next publication !

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- Hello everybody, I'm Capucine, I'm twenty years old and I'm a Frenchy girl !
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