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Climbing center
If I had to choose between climbing center indoors and climbing center outdoors, I would go for second option.
I have choosen this, because it more dangereous and exhilarating.
I won't go for first because I rather be outdoor.
Moreover, spend time outside is more healthy!

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- If I had to choose between climbing center indoors and climbing center outdoors, I would go for second option.
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문장 2
- I have choosen this, because it more dangereous and exhilarating.
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- I won't go for first because I rather be outdoor.
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- Moreover, spend time outside is more healthy!
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