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  • Hi, friends) please, help me to check this motivation letter

  • Dear Madam/Sir, I am writing to apply for the position of a Teacher at your language school.
  • The vacancy came to my knowledge from INTESOL Company, located in Vladivostok, Russia.
  • I am currently completing my Master’s degree at the Amur State University in Russia with a major in linguistics and pedagogics.
  • Throughout getting my Master’s degree and TESOL’ teacher education I gained the most important skills that improved my viewpoint and dedication to this particular profession.
  • Working as a tour guide in our city, I polished my interpersonal and communication skills while contacting with Chinese tourists (adults as well as kids).
  • Since my focus has centered in foreign language and teaching I am very enthusiastic about continuing the matter of all my life in a foreign country school.
  • My recent teaching experience during interning at the university allowed me to enhance my beliefs upon the teaching career and realise that I get pleasure from teaching as well as my students.
  • My main goal in this particular field is to do the best to motivate and incorporate students with English.
  • Despite small experience, I have some examples of encouraging students and creating a care and friendly atmosphere in a classroom.
  • I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you in person and discuss how my teaching and language skills can meet with the needs of your school and the results I can bring as a teacher.
  • Thank you for your time and consideration Yours sincerely,

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Sentence 3
    • I am currently completing my Master’s degree at the Amur State University in Russia with a major in linguistics and pedagogics.
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  • Sentence 4
    • Throughout getting my Master’s degree and TESOL’ teacher education I gained the most important skills that improved my viewpoint and dedication to this particular profession.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4
  • Sentence 5
    • Working as a tour guide in our city, I polished my interpersonal and communication skills while contacting with Chinese tourists (adults as well as kids).
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5
  • Sentence 6
    • Since my focus has centered in foreign language and teaching I am very enthusiastic about continuing the matter of all my life in a foreign country school.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6
  • Sentence 7
    • My recent teaching experience during interning at the university allowed me to enhance my beliefs upon the teaching career and realise that I get pleasure from teaching as well as my students.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7
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  • Sentence 9
    • Despite small experience, I have some examples of encouraging students and creating a care and friendly atmosphere in a classroom.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 9
  • Sentence 10
    • I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you in person and discuss how my teaching and language skills can meet with the needs of your school and the results I can bring as a teacher.
      Vote now!
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