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Text from Alysondbrp01 - English

  • animal farm-text3

  • To continues, everyone must be together and unite.
  • This is why the seven commandments exists.
  • All humans is an ennemy.
  • Nobody is this farm can approch humans.
  • Whereas all animals is a friend.
  • I could not accept if an animal regect an other animal.
  • Then, animal mustn't live as humans.
  • We are not humans, we are better than humans. We are united.
  • Nobody can judge here.
  • Finally, I think that I could speak about our future.
  • Tomorrow or in a few days I would like zero humans and animals be able to be free all around the world.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English