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Text from yananim - English

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  • The title of this book is "Great expictations".
  • The book is written by Charles Dickens.
  • The story is about a poor 10 years old orphan named Pip who is confronted by a prisoner.
  • This encounter will have a huge impact on Pip`s future.
  • The action takes place in a cemetery.
  • A scary man suddenly appeared in rough grey clothes with a heavey prisoner chain on his legs.
  • He was limpingand tremblig his eyes bugged out and ratted and suddenly, his teeth chattering loudly, grabbed Pip`s chin.
  • He asked where Pip lived.
  • And after Pip pointed out the place, the man turned the boy upside down and emptied his pockets.
  • The boy was absolutely frightened.
  • He had a great feeling of helplessness and danger, then the man forced him to bring him a file and food otherwise, he would kill him.

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