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Text from yananim - English

  • look after a pet

  • Is it a good idea for a child to look after a pet from a young age?
  • There are so many benefits that pets provide for kids!
  • My opinion is that a child should look after a pet from a young age.
  • To start with, children learn responsibility by caring and feeding the pet.
  • They also learn respect for animals by creating a special relationship with another living thing.
  • In addition to this, Kids tend to think of all the good, fun benefits of having a pet.
  • Parents who are experienced, or even first-time pet owners, know there is a lot of patience, time and effort involved but that the payoff of sharing your home and life is the unconditional love a well-cared-for pet gives.
  • On the other hand, there are Opponents pets for small children say that this is often compared to the gift of a new toy and do not understand that every animal needs food or rest, similar to any creature alive.
  • In addition, children may forget to feed your pet or walk with it.
  • That is why, relatives are not willing to be paired and Pet Care would be preferable to postpone the adoption of it in the house.
  • To Sum up, we can not agree that the animals in the house can mean dirt, food and veterinary expenses or early get up and walk in any weather.
  • However, I personally think that the joy and happiness of our small house pets provide outweigh the problems.
  • Not without reason, he said, the animal is the only bliss that can be purchased.

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