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I took this photo whan I was at school on the 1 sptember .
In the foreground of the picture you can see a senior is bearing first-grader who is ringing the bell.
Girl is giving the first ring, signifying the beginning of a new academic year.
They are very happy to begin a new stady year.
In the background of the picture youn can see the building of the school and other students.

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- I took this photo whan I was at school on the 1 sptember .
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- In the foreground of the picture you can see a senior is bearing first-grader who is ringing the bell.
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- Girl is giving the first ring, signifying the beginning of a new academic year.
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- They are very happy to begin a new stady year.
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- In the background of the picture youn can see the building of the school and other students.
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