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  • Christmas gifts

  • The frantic race to presents when in fact happiness lies in small daily gestures , not during Christmas .To the religious significate , Christmas should make us reflect not stop being better , not to hurt us , to always find the good in everything.The best gift is to be simple and good person with yourself and with everybody.

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    • The frantic race to presents when in fact happiness lies in small daily gestures , not during Christmas .To the religious significate , Christmas should make us reflect not stop being better , not to hurt us , to always find the good in everything.The best gift is to be simple and good person with yourself and with everybody.
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