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Text from Wejo - English

  • The party I visited

  • Hi everybody!
  • I've just come from the party!
  • When I entered the hall where the party was taking place I heard some girls singing on the stage.
  • It was very boring to listen to that songs!
  • Everyone could not wait to start dancing..
  • Luckily they quitted singing and said something like:Now you can rock on the dancefloor! .
  • I thought that people would left their seats and break into dancing having heard the permission.
  • But party hosts had to make others dance.
  • After all the stage became very crowded!
  • There were a lot of dancing people.
  • In fact they danced in the old approved manner.
  • I mean everyone rose his arm and began to shake his head........
  • To be continued....

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