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  • a description of my work

  • Good evening to everyone, I need a correction of this text.I am posting a picture on a site and I want to be sure that there aren't lots of mistakes. thank you "Same Time, Same Place on Christmas date..!" Hi everyone, I know I am bit late, I should have posted these pictures on Christmas but better late than ever.
  • My idea for Christmas was to realize the same scene took in two different timelines.
  • In both the pictures you can see both my invented characters both others taken from different sources.
  • In the first picture from left to right: Winston, the little ghost form Medievil 2.
  • Philip Herder, In my stories he is the old museum attendant, a very dependable man always and a father figure for the youngsters.
  • Miriam Grace Ward: The young granddaughter of Nick Ward, boisterous girl , she often gets into troubles for her curiosity, but she is determined to follow her granddad's footsteps.
  • Nicholas James Ward: A perceptive archaeologist in his youth, Nicholas has many secrets that doesn't share with anyone.
  • He loves all his family and friends and share with his granddaughter the same boisterous personality.
  • Second picture Sodreco Sharistarah a character of my dearest friend (lsKaori), he is a rayiaiky and ex gladiator who is working as nocturnal attendant for the museum. if you want to know his personality you can visit my friend's page.
  • Philip Herder again.
  • I imagined when Phil saw Mim patting Nicky's head, he remembered Nicholas Senior doing the same thing with little Mim in the past.
  • Nicholas Junior Ward: Mim's younger brother, a sweet child who loves animals and dreams to become a Vet.
  • Miriam Grace Ward: she is in her early twenties in this picture. Winston again.
  • Well that's all for now.
  • I wish a happy new year to everyone with the ones you love.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • Good evening to everyone, I need a correction of this text.I am posting a picture on a site and I want to be sure that there aren't lots of mistakes. thank you "Same Time, Same Place on Christmas date..!" Hi everyone, I know I am bit late, I should have posted these pictures on Christmas but better late than ever.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 1
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    • Philip Herder, In my stories he is the old museum attendant, a very dependable man always and a father figure for the youngsters.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5
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    • Miriam Grace Ward: The young granddaughter of Nick Ward, boisterous girl , she often gets into troubles for her curiosity, but she is determined to follow her granddad's footsteps.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 6
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    • Nicholas James Ward: A perceptive archaeologist in his youth, Nicholas has many secrets that doesn't share with anyone.
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    • Second picture Sodreco Sharistarah a character of my dearest friend (lsKaori), he is a rayiaiky and ex gladiator who is working as nocturnal attendant for the museum. if you want to know his personality you can visit my friend's page.
      Vote now!
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    • I imagined when Phil saw Mim patting Nicky's head, he remembered Nicholas Senior doing the same thing with little Mim in the past.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 11
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