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I would like to learn English so I could talk without problems.
I know basicly, but I dont know which tense I should use in some sentences and I dont know when I should use "a" and "the" so you can leave your comments with tips.
I'm from Bosnia, it's a little country in Europe, Balkan.
Our neighbors are Croatia, Serbia and Montenegro.
I live in a city named Tuzla.
It's third most populated city in my county.
It's a city of salt.
Full name of my country is Bosnia and Herzegovina, and most people in the world doest know where it is, and acctualy they never heard about it.
This are my first text, I hope i didn't make a lot of mistakes.

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- I would like to learn English so I could talk without problems.
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문장 2
- I know basicly, but I dont know which tense I should use in some sentences and I dont know when I should use "a" and "the" so you can leave your comments with tips.
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- I'm from Bosnia, it's a little country in Europe, Balkan.
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- Our neighbors are Croatia, Serbia and Montenegro.
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- I live in a city named Tuzla.
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- It's third most populated city in my county.
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- It's a city of salt.
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- Full name of my country is Bosnia and Herzegovina, and most people in the world doest know where it is, and acctualy they never heard about it.
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- This are my first text, I hope i didn't make a lot of mistakes.
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