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Please correct.The story continues.
- I knocked to the door and waited.
- At the same time I dreamed how I crossing the beautiful meadow and find a lake.
- The surface of the lake sparkling because of sunshines and into it is some yellow waterflowers.
- Water is so warm and I swim and swim without wish to get out of it.
- Yes, it will be so great.
- I took the galance to my watch, there was a plenty of time before the day becoming evening.
- And I was glad that in the very moment I will pass the consignment and beeing free again.
- I waited and waited.
- I wanted to get rid of this stuff right away.
- But there was nothing inside the house, no sounds and nobody did not come meet me. So what to do?
- I promised to trade it hand by hand.
- Now I faced with problem.
- "But what I can do?
- Only wait?" It was not perspective solution for me.
- KaidiV
January 2016
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