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My day
Hello my name is marie, I live un strasbourg and I love listen music and sometimes dancing.
Today I went to my lesson and then I'm going to my job.

marie4651January 2016赶紧投票吧！
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- My day
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句子 1
- Hello my name is marie, I live un strasbourg and I love listen music and sometimes dancing.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Today I went to my lesson and then I'm going to my job.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2