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  • Christmas Day

  • On Christmas Day I went with my brother and my mother to my aunt's house in Naples.
  • My cousin brought us there with his beautiful big new grey car.
  • We arrived in the morning and we stayed there all day.
  • When we arrived, my aunt welcomed us very warmly because I hadn't saw her for many years.
  • I was also very happy to see the others because I missed them so much : there were my two cousins with their girlfriends and the little daughter of one of them.
  • She's a sweet one year-old blue-eyed little girl, I was looking forward to seeing her and I loved spending time with her playing and carrying her.
  • I must say that she was quite heavy for me and I couldn't keep her for too long, so I also helped her to walk, keeping her hands very carefully/attentively .
  • She's a very lively and sunny little girl, and although she didn't know me, she didn't have any problem to stay with me without her mother.
  • We ate all together a very delicious seafood pasta and after we talked all together.
  • There also were the two cats which were the cats of my cousin Flavia; the last time I saw them they were very little and now it we very surprising seeing how they had become old.
  • The white cat, had a bad illness and vets had to operate it and to remove its ears.
  • It also looked very sad because it, like all of us, missed my cousin.
  • In fact, while my two cousins who were there at Christmas live alone with their girlfriends, in my aunt's house still lived my cousin Flavia.
  • She was a very solar beautiful young girl, and she unfortunately died last year in November, because of a tumor.
  • She was only 23 years old and she didn't deserve that..
  • I love her so much and I always talked with her, she was the only cousin to who I spoke more because we only had 6 years of difference, so she was the youngest of my cousins.
  • So although it was Christmas, we couldn't celebrate that much because we remembered the past years, when we were all together , but anyway I tried to distract my aunt, because I know how difficult can be, especially during holiday days.
  • I hope I can come back soon to her house, so that I can keep her company, because I know how sad and empty can be that house when she's alone only with my uncle.

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    • I was also very happy to see the others because I missed them so much : there were my two cousins with their girlfriends and the little daughter of one of them.
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 5DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 5
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    • She's a sweet one year-old blue-eyed little girl, I was looking forward to seeing her and I loved spending time with her playing and carrying her.
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 6DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 6
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    • I must say that she was quite heavy for me and I couldn't keep her for too long, so I also helped her to walk, keeping her hands very carefully/attentively .
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 7DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 7
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    • She's a very lively and sunny little girl, and although she didn't know me, she didn't have any problem to stay with me without her mother.
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 8DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 8
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    • There also were the two cats which were the cats of my cousin Flavia; the last time I saw them they were very little and now it we very surprising seeing how they had become old.
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 10DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 10
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    • In fact, while my two cousins who were there at Christmas live alone with their girlfriends, in my aunt's house still lived my cousin Flavia.
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 13DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 13
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    • I love her so much and I always talked with her, she was the only cousin to who I spoke more because we only had 6 years of difference, so she was the youngest of my cousins.
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 16DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 16
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    • So although it was Christmas, we couldn't celebrate that much because we remembered the past years, when we were all together , but anyway I tried to distract my aunt, because I know how difficult can be, especially during holiday days.
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 17DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 17
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    • I hope I can come back soon to her house, so that I can keep her company, because I know how sad and empty can be that house when she's alone only with my uncle.
      Glasajte sada!
    • DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 18DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 18