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  • The one million dollars idea

  • How many times have we read a post of a one million dollar idea that will change the word, hear a friend tell us with about his own one million dollars idea or even more to talk ourselves not without suspicion about or super secret idea that will make us rich?.
  • Of course this not in rare occasions is followed by an 'only if I have...' the time? the people? already a million?.
  • At that moment we start to realize that an idea is not far from a dream, a delusion, could be a good one but a it's delusion either way.
  • A profounder thinking will take us to the realization that the real question here is: Am I able to implement an idea that could end in a product or services that is valued in a seven figures number?

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    • How many times have we read a post of a one million dollar idea that will change the word, hear a friend tell us with about his own one million dollars idea or even more to talk ourselves not without suspicion about or super secret idea that will make us rich?.
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    • At that moment we start to realize that an idea is not far from a dream, a delusion, could be a good one but a it's delusion either way.
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    • A profounder thinking will take us to the realization that the real question here is: Am I able to implement an idea that could end in a product or services that is valued in a seven figures number?
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