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Text von Luisr_ramirez - English

  • Venezuela

  • First of all, I haven't travel out of my county so this surely have a lack of perspective.
  • Venezuela have a certain qualities which make it special.
  • Most people will relay in his landscape, nature to show the qualities of the country, we have a great beaches, Margarita is a beautiful island, high picks, snow and desertic areas (los medanos de Coro), the highest waterfall el Salto Angel, which I haven't the pleasure to know yet, And writing this make me realize how much I'm missing of the place I live.
  • Others of course will talk about the natural resources with which we count, the prominent of course the oil, or it may be the sweet water.
  • And maybe more will talk about their people, this is the tricky one, there are lots of awesome people you can meet in Venezuela as also are somes you will prefer not to know.
  • Can't forget the maths there are probably a close to normal distribution around the world on the amount of people that a given person will be glad to know.
  • But certainly there's something special here, a kind of sense of humor that can make people feel quite good even in adverse scenarios or at least resist the scourge.

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    • Most people will relay in his landscape, nature to show the qualities of the country, we have a great beaches, Margarita is a beautiful island, high picks, snow and desertic areas (los medanos de Coro), the highest waterfall el Salto Angel, which I haven't the pleasure to know yet, And writing this make me realize how much I'm missing of the place I live.
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    • And maybe more will talk about their people, this is the tricky one, there are lots of awesome people you can meet in Venezuela as also are somes you will prefer not to know.
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    • Can't forget the maths there are probably a close to normal distribution around the world on the amount of people that a given person will be glad to know.
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    • But certainly there's something special here, a kind of sense of humor that can make people feel quite good even in adverse scenarios or at least resist the scourge.
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