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Text from Julangue - English

  • why have I to improve my English and why it's difficult ...

  • Firstly, I'm university student in science and nowadays it's more than essential to master the english.
  • In fact, almost the whole scientific community publish research articles in english.
  • Otherwise, as a French speaker I'm limited at few articles and readers.
  • Secondly, maybe I ll go in an English university beacause, for me the best way to learn language is immersion.
  • And also, that could increase study domains accessibles.
  • Now, I can understand almost all in english, but my biggest problem is expression, indeed I don't practice it, so it's hard for me to express myself without errors and with decent accent.
  • Before all, my biggest learning problem is a cultural problem.
  • I don't like politic and social aspects from US and GB.
  • For me, these countries are leading models of Mondial finance (capitalism, ultraliberalism..) and legal wars.
  • Few words to illustrate, stock exchange, petrodollar, 2008, goldman, inegalities, gaza, weapon, monsanto, queen, empire, lobbys...
  • I could easily extend facts that are repulsive for me...
  • I never had studied sociology, but I ll resume in three words cupidity, individualism and lie...
  • And the worst in the story is the lack of objectivity from the media and population.
  • For example, even when these government bombarded civils of the world, they are nice whereas the countries bombarded are bad...
  • A fair and clever balance...
  • I m not defending France, this country is also following theses atrocities.... but it s my native language... and I like the fact that France have socialist culture in comparaison with English countries.
  • If you read until there, I hope that you haven t be hurt if you are english native..
  • And if you think they are allegations I wait your answer...
  • Of course, to have english friend could help me to relativise my point of view... Peace

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