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  • With the increased global demand in oil and gas

  • With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources.
  • To what extent do you agree?
  • Owing the problem of oil and gas demand growth, some people think that undiscovered areas could be a solution and it must be dedicated more resources.
  • In my opinion, i completely agree to invest in alternative resources.
  • Firstly, oil and gas are not infinite resources.
  • That means that sooner or later we will must deal with this kind of problem.
  • Therefore, It needs to look for new sustainable resources which can substitute oil and gas.
  • They are, most of all, used for producing energy and energy can be obtained from other sources.
  • For instance, the sun is an infinite source of it.
  • Furthermore, we are already moving in that direction.
  • Solar panels are always more functional and reachable.
  • By now, a lot of new houses have it and they can produce enough energy for their own sustain.
  • On the other hand, these alternative sources are not enough functional to substitute completely oil and gas.
  • For this reason, we have to invest more and more resources in discovered areas and trying to find new solutions for this huge problem.
  • Universities, helped by Government, are working hard trying to solve this issue.
  • They are financed by large companies, which see new resources of energy as a future form of profit.
  • They would earn billions, with the right research investment.
  • For instance, ABB (Big electricity company), is investing a considerable amount of money in Polihub (Milan Startup District).
  • Which is the core of Italian and International Startups.
  • In conclusion, we are all focus on what it will be the next resources of energy that it will tackle this quick growth demand in oil and gas.
  • The world needs a big discovery and i am pretty sure that it will come out from a developing country, where needs are stronger.

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