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  • More and more Americans are questioning things, becoming more aware of their government’s corruption and denouncing it.
  • Nevertheless, they are still few people and in general the average citizen believes fervently in American Exceptionalism.
  • As all empires do, the US will eventually collapse, in short term probably not because its citizens rebel against their oppressors, but because of the instability of the system.
  • When the system falls, the fraud will be evident and hopefully people will rebel.
  • It may fall economically because of the bank’s speculation, or it may fall because of a war: banks cannot keep creating money out of nothing and indebting people endlessly, nor can The United States keep bombing the Middle East and trying to rule the world without creating more hatred against them.
  • As long as we don’t make an effort for changing our values as a society and individuals, we are bound to repeat history, to commit the same errors of the past.
  • However, it does not matter how well-constructed the lie which we live in is, truth always wins, and time puts everything in its place.

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    • As all empires do, the US will eventually collapse, in short term probably not because its citizens rebel against their oppressors, but because of the instability of the system.
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    • It may fall economically because of the bank’s speculation, or it may fall because of a war: banks cannot keep creating money out of nothing and indebting people endlessly, nor can The United States keep bombing the Middle East and trying to rule the world without creating more hatred against them.
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    • As long as we don’t make an effort for changing our values as a society and individuals, we are bound to repeat history, to commit the same errors of the past.
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    • However, it does not matter how well-constructed the lie which we live in is, truth always wins, and time puts everything in its place.
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