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Text from ilja17 - English

  • My thoughts about learning languages

  • I wanna share you something... but I don't know what :) So, I'm gonna write my thoughts about learning languages.
  • Do you talk to yourself language you're learning? I do.
  • And there is a strange thing for me.
  • Why can't I speak quickly and without real mistakes and thinking of how to make a sentence when I'm talking to someone, if when I'm talking to myself, I can.
  • It seems to be a problem in my stance.
  • I just have to relax at that moment.
  • And I shouldn't think of the grammar much.
  • 'Cause when I'm talking to someone, thoughts about the grammar make me crazy.
  • Then I can think about a sentence for a long time.
  • Also it's an answer for the question, "why when I have been talking to someone for a long time, it becomes much easyer?".
  • And that is an answer for the question "why alcohol helps to be better in speaking?".
  • Because both those things relaxes you and then you stop thinking about the grammar and just speak from your heart.
  • Well, it's all what I wanted to say.
  • Although, wait, please, there is one thing more.
  • I with my Indian friend we play online games sometimes.
  • We improve our English that way :) And if you like playing games too, please, join us.
  • We would like to see a native English speaker or just a person who speaks English well among us.
  • Thank you very much for your attantion!

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