सुधार

Text from vaness182 - English

  • happy birthday

  • Today is 30th November, today is the Xiomy's birthday my girlfriend, because, today I will make a cake for her, She likes the strawberries and chocolate then It will be a vanilla cake with chocolate coverage and strawberries.
  • Also, I bought a teddy, a necklace and earrings for her, I hope that she likes it.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Title
  • Vakya 1
    • Today is 30th November, today is the Xiomy's birthday my girlfriend, because, today I will make a cake for her, She likes the strawberries and chocolate then It will be a vanilla cake with chocolate coverage and strawberries.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 1
  • Vakya 2