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  • Some people work for the same organizatio

  • Some people work for the same organization all their working life.
  • Others think that is better to work for different organizations.
  • Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
  • Regarding the dilemma if it is better working in just one organization instead changing fews during the working life, people are oriented on opposite positions.
  • I completely agree with people who think that is better change and try different organizations.
  • Firstly, I think that changing is one of the most important part of our life.
  • When something changes we are always full of strong emotions.
  • Whatever they are, good or bad feelings, we show our real human nature during these moments.
  • Furthermore, changing company can reveal you secrets of your job.
  • Such as, P&G organization.
  • The company is famous for its talents finding.
  • Their leadership training is the most effective in the entire world and worker after few years in Procter leave the organization for starting a new career in other fields, as HORECA, GDO and so on.
  • To give a clear example, most successful american CEOs come from other companies.
  • Moreover, they revealed that they look for their substitutes in rival companies management.
  • That means that who can deal with big changes are the best executives too.
  • On the other hand, leaving colleagues and the first company it is always hard.
  • Not everyone wants to change; people are scared by changes and they prefer to stay in their comfort zones.
  • After years of work in the same company with the same colleagues they see the organization as a second home.
  • In conclusion, I think that changing is the best way to improve yourself, but at the same time I understand people who care about their company.
  • It is only about ambition.

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