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hello, it's my first time with publishing what's my thoughts actually it's my first Sharing any text.

so as we all know that middle east has a lot of wars and hate.

i think that all of that happened because of politicians and Media so, if politics brings hate and angry , why don't we keep our political thoughts to ourself, why we need to force people to believe in our thoughts, can you imagine life without political wars.

for me i think we will have peace (not governments peace) but people peace between eachother. thank you.