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  • In my dream

  • yesterday, i dream there are beutiful place where are all people have a beutiful smile there is no war nor hatred,I was very happy in my dream,So I believe that when I almost wake up from sleep that does not exist in the world war; this in my dream

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    • yesterday, i dream there are beutiful place where are all people have a beutiful smile there is no war nor hatred,I was very happy in my dream,So I believe that when I almost wake up from sleep that does not exist in the world war; this in my dream
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