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today
Today I went to Walsall College for give them back the application form for the English course I am looking for then I got in touch with my friend Freddy, we got a bus to Birmingham and visited the museum of science and industry together.
We saw how work different electronical machines and engeners for produce electricity and energy.
Also we saw a show in the planetarium and different representation and explications about the galaxy...
We took many pictures, then we had some walk in Birmingham University and went outside.
I bought some BCAA for the Gym and we went back to Walsall.
He sent me all the photos via my email.

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- Today I went to Walsall College for give them back the application form for the English course I am looking for then I got in touch with my friend Freddy, we got a bus to Birmingham and visited the museum of science and industry together.
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- We saw how work different electronical machines and engeners for produce electricity and energy.
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- Also we saw a show in the planetarium and different representation and explications about the galaxy...
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- We took many pictures, then we had some walk in Birmingham University and went outside.
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- I bought some BCAA for the Gym and we went back to Walsall.
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- He sent me all the photos via my email.
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