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Today
I went to my work, it was frozen and snowing starting while I walked.
I picked in the A case, temperatures dropped down and it is very cold inside the company, we work with our jackets and hat on.
The top of my fingers was frozen.
It was better in the beginning of the afternoon and I was warm enough.
After working I went back home, April was cleaning all the floor.
Also I spoke with Robin on Facebook about his diet preparation for the top de colmar.

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câu 1
- I went to my work, it was frozen and snowing starting while I walked.
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câu 2
- I picked in the A case, temperatures dropped down and it is very cold inside the company, we work with our jackets and hat on.
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câu 3
- The top of my fingers was frozen.
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câu 4
- It was better in the beginning of the afternoon and I was warm enough.
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câu 5
- After working I went back home, April was cleaning all the floor.
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câu 6
- Also I spoke with Robin on Facebook about his diet preparation for the top de colmar.
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