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Text from shanaellea - English

  • Covering letter

  • XXX means the name of the brand.
  • Thanks four your help Dear Sir or Madam, I have learned about your offer for a sales consultant intern who should have started since January 1st.
  • With this letter, I have the pleasure to offer you my application for this work placement from May 1st.
  • (as I have a work placement to do for school) Sophisticated and innovative at the same time, XXX is for me a brand which embody all the values of the french fashion industry and which better expresses what is luxe today : the inventiveness and the importance of the rigourness regarding innovation, the opulence, the sensitive and the unrivalled.
  • With a first experience in the ready-to-wear as saleswoman, in XXX, I would like to pursue next to you, in order to get prepared for a luxe career.
  • Furthermore, improving my english by working for a shop that I love, will certainly be the best experience ever.
  • Attached to the elegance, the politeness, the discretion and the good work, I would like to place all my energy at the disposal of your customer base.
  • Other qualities like the punctuality, the serious and the integrity will be profitable to me doing this job.
  • I hope to have soon the chance to show you in person, my motivations during an interview.
  • Thank you, in advance, for your consideration.
  • Yours faithfully,

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English