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Summary
The action of the story takes place in the dirty room.
The story is about the man in love.
He is in love with a young woman named Diana,who doesn't respond to his feelings.He visits the chemist,who shows him a potion called '' the glove - cleaner''.
But Alan was very interested in buying the '' Love potion" that he could use on his lover sold by the old man.
This love potion used to increase dramatically the amount of attention and love from Diana.The old man persuaded him to buy the love potion.
But also he was very sure that Alan would be back to buy the very expensive "spot remover" so that it would help him in the future.

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문장 1
- The action of the story takes place in the dirty room.
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문장 2
- The story is about the man in love.
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문장 3
- He is in love with a young woman named Diana,who doesn't respond to his feelings.He visits the chemist,who shows him a potion called '' the glove - cleaner''.
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문장 4
- But Alan was very interested in buying the '' Love potion" that he could use on his lover sold by the old man.
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문장 5
- This love potion used to increase dramatically the amount of attention and love from Diana.The old man persuaded him to buy the love potion.
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문장 6
- But also he was very sure that Alan would be back to buy the very expensive "spot remover" so that it would help him in the future.
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