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Somebody from London ?
Hello !
I'm looking for someone who livres in London, because I would like to go in during July or August 2016 to improve my english (particularly my accent).
I search a teenager between 15 and 20 about, who learn french and who can accommodate.
I can, if you want travel in Britain during the holidays too ! Bye !

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- Hello !
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- I'm looking for someone who livres in London, because I would like to go in during July or August 2016 to improve my english (particularly my accent).
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- I search a teenager between 15 and 20 about, who learn french and who can accommodate.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- I can, if you want travel in Britain during the holidays too ! Bye !
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4