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- my day
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Sentence 1
- Hello, I have a nice day today.
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Sentence 2
- The sun was present in spite of it was cold.
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Sentence 3
- The snow will go tomorrow.
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Sentence 4
- I'm beginning my improvement in english today and i hope to progress very fast.
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