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picnic
I’m glad that you had a good time with your friends on the picnic.
As for me, I like picnics because I love to spend my free time on on fresh air with my friends.
We usually prepare a shashlik and vegetables for the picnic.
Most of all we like to play badminton and basketball.we always have a good time.To tell the truth, I like those small journeys very much.
So what about you?
What kind of games on the open do you like?
How many friends do you have on the picnic?
How you named your new puppy?

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- I’m glad that you had a good time with your friends on the picnic.
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- As for me, I like picnics because I love to spend my free time on on fresh air with my friends.
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- We usually prepare a shashlik and vegetables for the picnic.
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- Most of all we like to play badminton and basketball.we always have a good time.To tell the truth, I like those small journeys very much.
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- So what about you?
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- What kind of games on the open do you like?
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- How many friends do you have on the picnic?
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- How you named your new puppy?
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