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The cat and the tortoise
The cat was in his bed,in the floor and there was a tortoise that was walking around.
So when the tortoise was walking, it came across with the cat's bed and then the cat woke up.
The tortoise said:"Hey, you are a furry cat, let me cross".
Then, the cat began plays, moving his feet in the floor...

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- The cat and the tortoise
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문장 1
- The cat was in his bed,in the floor and there was a tortoise that was walking around.
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문장 2
- So when the tortoise was walking, it came across with the cat's bed and then the cat woke up.
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문장 3
- The tortoise said:"Hey, you are a furry cat, let me cross".
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문장 4
- Then, the cat began plays, moving his feet in the floor...
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4