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  • 5 things to do for the rebirth of economy

  • Starting from 2007, a dramatic economic crisis, yet present today, has showed itself with more and more clarity.
  • We are in front of the worst economic crisis in contemporary history, even worst than the famous 1929’s crisis.
  • With the worsening of the crisis also the possibility to guarantee the safety of the citizen could disappear because the worsening of the economic conditions could lead also to big riots.
  • Also anarchy in the streets is an hyphotesis to take in consideration, in case some traumatic economic event happens, that can’t be mantained under control by authorities.
  • The explosion of some financial or productive bubble could be, this time, uncontrollable and lead to a cataclysm.

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    • Starting from 2007, a dramatic economic crisis, yet present today, has showed itself with more and more clarity.
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    • We are in front of the worst economic crisis in contemporary history, even worst than the famous 1929’s crisis.
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    • With the worsening of the crisis also the possibility to guarantee the safety of the citizen could disappear because the worsening of the economic conditions could lead also to big riots.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
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    • Also anarchy in the streets is an hyphotesis to take in consideration, in case some traumatic economic event happens, that can’t be mantained under control by authorities.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
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    • The explosion of some financial or productive bubble could be, this time, uncontrollable and lead to a cataclysm.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5